I very much like the more finished drawing style on the left page, but as its incomplete and you've done the narrative in an unconventional way it's hard to say how effective it is? Although i can pick up the narrative on the first page so as long as it continues in that kind of flow i think it'll look great. Is this what you're including for the anthology?
Is that the museum collection carousel horse? I thought I recognised it haha.Are you going to have text?
It's flowing so far - I want to make it a four page story, but will stop at two pages for the anthology - that is my good friend the carousel horse, but there will be no text for this early on - I need time to organize the thoughts I have about the torrid, passionate and vengeful circumstances these three characters find themselves in!
that horse crops up everywhere doesn't it? Perhaps I should do a new story that includes it too XP Doesn't James the horse appear in shatterface as well Debbie? I'm liking the work as ever Chiu though the narrative escapes me at the moment...I think maybe when its done I will appreciate more in it. Unconventional as ever eh?
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