Thursday, 7 October 2010
This is a rough layout and design of the first page to my graphic novel, its a bit on the shaky side, and im sorry about that.
Panel 1 a boy standing alone in his local woodlands, next to the river, his foot placed on a rock, crying beacuse his lonely. Devils are appearing around him watching and listening
Narrator Once upon a time there was a boy... This boy was very lonely and at Devils Creek he made a wish for a friend ...
Panel 2 Devils think its an intresting opportunity to cause some mischief, so they begin to make the boy a friend
Narrator The devils heard his wish
Panel 3 Devils are carrying the gift that they have made for the boy, the biggest devil cant cope with carrying the gift so is lying on top of the object, while the other devils are hard at work. Two of them are pulling the object upwards and one of them is trying to push it upwards.
Narrator On the boys eighth birthday the devils came with a gift
Devil one If youre not going to help go home
Devil two too heavy
Panel 4 One devil pushs on the boys top to make him turn, the other devil calls to him to make him face the right way
Devil one turn around Jonathan Peter's
i really want to add stupid boy to the last devils quote
a really rough draft of page one, i want to try a few more designs, this is the best one so far, but i think a lot needs changing to be honest, i wanted to create a build up for the next page, but in doing so i think ive cramed in alot in the first page, so i might spead this page between 2, and show abit more development, like how the boy made the wish ect, ill reupload them when i have figured out which approach is best.
i typed this up on word yesterday, then i copied it here, i didnt understand why it said error Html, i was confussed, it took me a while to figure out what i did wrong, sorry about that, i feel so stupid, anyway ill upload progress later today