this is a rough draft of the first page of my graphic novel and first page of script i dont usually post pencil as i prefur shading in pen .
Page 1. panel 1
1-4of a page
Zoomed out shot of futuristic city screen with eyes on everywhere and flood lights etc.
Narrator: 2099 the cusp of a new century technology reigns. We are all being watched
Panel 2 2-4 of a page
2 men dressed in black with visors on backs to us , in centre of the room boss at a desk back to us looking at a wall of mixed screens wearing a long white coat , on right to men in similar white coats to boss also in visors.
Narrator: brain washing is the new ruler
Only men are free.
Between bottom of panel 2 and top of panel 3
Narrator: or so they think.
Panel 3 3-4 of page vertical
Naked woman with arms bound behind her back, blindfolded, with a chastity belt padlocked on. She has a feather duster in her mouth cleaning a desk .
Split in page
Narrator: women now the slaves and tools of a world that’s no longer needs them….
A womens severed head with probes in the brain, ear and neck.
Panle 4 4-4 of page vertical
A naked woman lying on her back throws her platform heel through the TV set in front of her
Scarlet: there makein TV shows out of this shit now fucking fantastic.