Sunday, 25 October 2009

redo home invasion


the inked version

1 comment:

myeyeisonfire said...

First panel is slightly unclear, feels like abstract patterns as opposed to immediately recognizable location

Overall I love the panel layouts, there is a sense of tension through your use of blacks, tonal greys, and use of white space - however the narrative is, like the first situ panel, unclear

Who is shooting who, and why?

Great visual style