Murray mentioned that his story was five pages long and that we needed an single page to fill the space. I did this rough in my sketchbook last week and then thought that with some polish it could fit. The idea is that the are 4 "mini stories" taking place in 4 stories of a house, all affecting eachother through the walls/panels. I would change the stories themselves to make them a bit more interesting, but how is it as a concept?
ps. This is rough and obviously not the finished look, I did 2 sample panels to show how it might look finished (not colour though of course)