It takes a bit of getting into, but it's consistently silly humour doesn't detract from a smooth and coherent read. Good job, though I'd say it's in-between the Beano and 2000AD now - that's a good thing, because I see as marketable.Ever thought of producing your own full comic - Title, covers, games, free toys? Different set of stories each week same characters?
Yea thanks- I'd say you hit it spot on, haha and I'm not insulted about the beano/2000AD link, because as you say its marketable! My plan is for comica/thought bubble is to put this comic/toastie-o/ the new version of bald cypress and a further comic together in an anthology- but the idea with toys and games as well sounds great as it'll support each other! the murray action figure perhaps?
By about page 2 I thought 'what the hell am I reading and where is this going' - but by page 5 you are fully absorbed in the (robotic) humour and the story is concluded well. If you were to do an anthology I think it would work really well - as after the 1st story your audience would be fully engaged and 'get it'!!!As usual your style is consistent throughout and the writing is much improved since the last draft.
Yeah, i like your style, I don't know how easy its meant to be reading a comic but most of it made sense! The funny electronic based randomness in there was also good.
you are becoming so good murray! i always look at your stuff and think how professional and original it is. i think you're going to do really well!
Post a Comment