hahaa like it :) tho i dont get where that close up on the eye fits or what s its purpose to the story :s
Ah that means the transition failed, the eye is supposed to represent the idea of going from inside my head to me outside thinking, emphasised by the change in clothes as well- but I guess it wasn't obvious enough by your reaction, so didn't pull it off, taken on board to emphasize transitions, maybe with another panel, or clearer view of the characters in his eye to show thats where they were? hmm!
you could insert more close ups of the face becoming closer, aiming towards the eye, maybe the transition might become more apparent?
I got it! quite clear to me, just too much of a cliche!
just the idea of forming a narrative from the blank sheet of paper/ creative block syndrome.
oops muzza! just remembered i forgot to bring you the jellyfist! want me to post it out to you??
nah no worries vicky, I torrented it so that's cool, thanks though!
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