Tuesday, 16 June 2009

Flying Mushrooms and Rabbits- with text!!

Hopefully final pages for ink soup- the type i used is lucinda sans, i wanted it to look robotic, like a computer screen text documenting what was going on. I wanted it to look a bit like what you see at the start of films, with the text running across a computer screen, i wanted it to look a bit weird and out of place, but as though it stands out, i quite like the effect .I know the title is on the opposite page, but i think this looks ok, any comments welcome.


4 comments:

MurrayMah said...

Hey hannah! First off I like the clarity in your drawings more now, the images stand out more which is a good progression. However your text doesn't work because it feels kinda just dropped in? It's not a huge thing to change, I would suggest just trying to make your type sit below or above the images in their own space as it'll improve the overall design and comprehension ten fold! Hope this helps!

cherry said...

your penciling is really nice. but i agree with murray. maybe if u sketch out the text! 8D it will fit more. the furry spacebunnys are very cute

myeyeisonfire said...

samo samo, except I also think you should work on the story? it feels like an intro.

Hansolo said...

Ok thanks il work on the text, but the story is suppost to be an intro really, because id want to continue it in other issues etc.