Monday 1 March 2010

Redraft of 'Revelations'




A revised version of the first page I submitted previously. I am currently working on the second.

I have simplified the story and removed a lot of the unnecessary fluffiness.

Better?

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1 comment:

Chiu said...

looking good, still feels like it needs some subtle tonal contrast to bring out your riders out from the panels

2 March 2010 at 11:37

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