A revised version of the first page I submitted previously. I am currently working on the second.
I have simplified the story and removed a lot of the unnecessary fluffiness.
Better?
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Monday, 1 March 2010
Redraft of 'Revelations'
A revised version of the first page I submitted previously. I am currently working on the second.
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