Page 04 with the disc looks gorgeous! But 3 and 5 need working on, especially 3 in terms of viewpoint
Enjoying this Ed, reiterating what Chiu said, but also I'd like to see you play with the page layouts abit more- maybe explore a wider range of what panels can do for you in illustration, maybe in a sense to chop and change in pace, I mean you do have that techinique in regards to building story through close ups and still moments, but I think if you could explore ways through your panel use as well that would also help you, especially with such a big undertaking! Haha plus had to be said but I love page 2 in regards to how it does have a creeping similarity to Milan's house he drew from yester year, lol you crazy kids!
when I said illustration I meant graphic novels *
cheers for the feedback guys :) Im slowly working through the images already done and analysing ways in which to improve or change them
yeah! I don't get it, what's with the blatant copy tactics :) hahahahahahahaahahahahahah!
if you want to learn from Milan, then learn to do better compositional studies, and visual preparatory studies. You can lead a horse to water, but a few of my third year team really can't be arse'd to drink it! lol!
lol chiu as if you reffered to me as a horse.... thats well slack!
sorry, should have been a mule, hahahahaaha!
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