much better! Type looks ace! Two very small problems! One last page top panels look off as they don't match lower panels! This can easily be solved if you extend the panels and draw a bit more for the clouds and hills - also on some of the sentences you have a line running through the type?? pencil lines?? Plus in some places the type still looks squashed. All of these problems I myself have had, and even had the work still published, but wished I'd had the luxury of time to change! so you are doing really well!!
the shoe looks ^&^**£ing ACE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
right - im on it!!!
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