Sunday, 22 March 2009

Another little nugget!

Hey guys, another little strip, ive tried to do things a little differently this time, made the title a found font as opposed to my own attempts.  Also made the panels hand drawn as opposed to trying to digitally render hand drawn rubbishness! Could do with a bit more tweaking, some areas are a bit wonky etc. But anyway, would be glad of some feedback otherwise! 

Thanks!

Vicktor.

3 comments:

MurrayMah said...

Again really like this vicky, like the consistency in your drawing and the line quality! The two criticisms i would have with this one though are:

1/ the transitions in the last panel is abit weak/muddled, so needs more defining between him falling, humpty in the hitting the ground and then the girl running away, they're really nice drawings but they lose their impact in the confusion.

2/Just desaturate the page as to not get those subtle coffee like tones sneaking in

And you've already mentioned the wonkyness, but it's cool that you're churning work out, but i think it would be cool to move away from the freaky fable theme and maybe work on something else to push you, have a look at cest bon kultur as it would be appropiate for you seeing as you work in black and white: http://www.cestbonkultur.com/

Hope any of this helps

myeyeisonfire said...

Hi!

this is not really a comment for vicky, but about how well murray is giving feedback! About the only person who is consistently analytical, detailed, and constuctive with his comments - I wish more of you would make the effort!!!

nortonius said...

hi murray! thanks for your feedback, i really do agree, this was something I whipped up last minute!! i will certainly make amendments :o) and ill definitely take a look at the website!