Hey, This is what i came up for this issue..heh not much of a story bt think the panels etc work nicely.. It s untitled for now bt soon will come up with a title)..
sorry, must be my perverse sense of humour, but I thought this one quite funny!!
I would refine some of drawings and sizes of the panels, especially the last one, where you could have more of a sense of height with a thinner taller panel - awkward because you would have to change/redo the drawings but worth it, because I think it's some of the best drawing I've seen you do - I can see a confidence growing!
I actually loved the use of tonal contrast - related to object and depth as opposed to solely light and shade - very effective, I was quite impressed!
Hey,
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sorry, must be my perverse sense of humour, but I thought this one quite funny!!
I would refine some of drawings and sizes of the panels, especially the last one, where you could have more of a sense of height with a thinner taller panel - awkward because you would have to change/redo the drawings but worth it, because I think it's some of the best drawing I've seen you do - I can see a confidence growing!
I actually loved the use of tonal contrast - related to object and depth as opposed to solely light and shade - very effective, I was quite impressed!
and inspired
can you also make it four pages?
ok thnx! :)
um yea, actually originally it was 4 pages but after when i came to do it i sort of squeezed them into 3..
* the last panel i made it this wide to give better the sense of distance of the two edges, but yea ur right it does need some fixing
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