Monday, 25 May 2009

Oh Deer!



Hey,
This is what i came up for this issue..heh not much of a story bt think the panels etc work nicely..
It s untitled for now bt soon will come up with a title)..

5 comments:

myeyeisonfire said...

sorry, must be my perverse sense of humour, but I thought this one quite funny!!

I would refine some of drawings and sizes of the panels, especially the last one, where you could have more of a sense of height with a thinner taller panel - awkward because you would have to change/redo the drawings but worth it, because I think it's some of the best drawing I've seen you do - I can see a confidence growing!

I actually loved the use of tonal contrast - related to object and depth as opposed to solely light and shade - very effective, I was quite impressed!

myeyeisonfire said...

and inspired

myeyeisonfire said...

can you also make it four pages?

left-handed osi-cat said...

ok thnx! :)
um yea, actually originally it was 4 pages but after when i came to do it i sort of squeezed them into 3..

left-handed osi-cat said...

* the last panel i made it this wide to give better the sense of distance of the two edges, but yea ur right it does need some fixing