Nice concept.Not entirely sure whats going on in the 3rd panel.He is either punching him or waving hello.
artistically i prefer the final cell. i really like the style of the figure and it works really well :D
yeah, i agree with Tom, and the figures anatomy looks a bit ridged in that panel. the other ones are great though, sort of give you this uneasy vertigo feeling.
hate to say this, in case it upsets you, but you've got a real talent for "designing" sequences using photographs. Your drawing, especially of characters is not as convincing. Some atmospheric colour too!
to be very honest, I could see your third page in grabdpapier - it all depends now, on what follows?
theres seems to be several different styles going on here. What is very strong though is the sequencing of your panels and the colour palet you choose to apply to it - very atmospheric and engaging!
I would like to see more consistency between the pages, but I get the experimental approach
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