okay! This may upset you, but shouldn't. The problem now, is that the first two pages don't look in the same style as the last three. The good news is that I think your social awareness narratives are rad! I'm not sure you need the last page, as everyone tends to try to over narrate their ideas - I actually like both the styles of drawing, so it's really up to you - If you want I will publish as is, as I think it's still worthy of being printed. I'm also really happy that you are pushing your work even though the assessments are over!
No, thats fine, the reason i put it up was to see what was wrong with it. I see what your saying about the styles been different and the last page could go. I don't mind really, I was thinkin of trying to do another one for the next ink soup as Im sick of this one!
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okay! This may upset you, but shouldn't. The problem now, is that the first two pages don't look in the same style as the last three. The good news is that I think your social awareness narratives are rad! I'm not sure you need the last page, as everyone tends to try to over narrate their ideas - I actually like both the styles of drawing, so it's really up to you - If you want I will publish as is, as I think it's still worthy of being printed. I'm also really happy that you are pushing your work even though the assessments are over!
Nice one Dan!
I agree with what Chiu said.
Yeah, nice to see u carry on doing your work.
No, thats fine, the reason i put it up was to see what was wrong with it. I see what your saying about the styles been different and the last page could go. I don't mind really, I was thinkin of trying to do another one for the next ink soup as Im sick of this one!
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