Tuesday, 20 April 2010

Just some images i've been doing hope to get ten more and keep going!!! Still need to work on the real quality to the images and the compositions to give more convincing depth








5 comments:

Rachael said...

A lot of these have a nice abstract- sort of quality, I like it, especially the last one. Though with the first one, maybe make the top and bottom lines of the card parrallel (paralell?) with the horizontal lines of the swipe machine?

Jon Lee-Keow said...

Thanks for the comment, never thought it would give that effect but thanks again. The first was tricky, i was trying to show a mid-way point, but thanks for the advice appriciated.=]

Is there any publishers or artists thst could help to inspire? thanks again

Donkeyman! said...

hey,
really nice work. i think the first 4 illustrations are good cz are working the best but the 5th illu sort of throws you off (i think that is the right expression). throughout the whole sequence you show that the character is an adult and there is a lovely consistency, but in the 5th the character looks like a teenager. also his hands look awkward-the right hand looks like he doesnt have a palm while the left the part where the wrist is it looks a bit like a wooden toy..

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Jon Lee-Keow said...

yeah i really had abit of difficulty in the fifth panel if your looking from top to down but there not in sequencial order my fault really but i will re- shuffle them, thanks for the comments pz