A lot of these have a nice abstract- sort of quality, I like it, especially the last one. Though with the first one, maybe make the top and bottom lines of the card parrallel (paralell?) with the horizontal lines of the swipe machine?
Thanks for the comment, never thought it would give that effect but thanks again. The first was tricky, i was trying to show a mid-way point, but thanks for the advice appriciated.=]Is there any publishers or artists thst could help to inspire? thanks again
hey,really nice work. i think the first 4 illustrations are good cz are working the best but the 5th illu sort of throws you off (i think that is the right expression). throughout the whole sequence you show that the character is an adult and there is a lovely consistency, but in the 5th the character looks like a teenager. also his hands look awkward-the right hand looks like he doesnt have a palm while the left the part where the wrist is it looks a bit like a wooden toy..
yeah i really had abit of difficulty in the fifth panel if your looking from top to down but there not in sequencial order my fault really but i will re- shuffle them, thanks for the comments pz
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