Friday, 14 October 2011

Beauty And The Beast

Made some changes which was discussed on Monday, like detail, panelling in page4 and added the text. I liked how it was obscur with 'him' and 'her' rather than names, dont hate me Tim.

1 comment:

Chiu said...

Like the panel borders the black page background, the stronger contrast - Last page is too badly drawn for my liking - the girl looks like her legs are major long and her knees shoved up her torso, and I guess the last picture is were she's supposed to look hunched, but looks like her shoulder is dislocated - you need to work on your anatomy