Cheltenham Illustration alternative idea in Progress

I am working an alternative design for the tree time tales piece but looking at the idea of time using mark making achieved by the old masters like Goya and even early 20th century artists like Boris Artzybasheff and then modernizing it with urban propaganda and references to animated shows very suttlery.

The left picture is the rough layout for the piece I have a video showing the image being sketched http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OKQXxK8YrzE&feature=channel_video_title  and the right is the obvious refined composition starting to ink it in but thinking more carefully about the marks and lines I create so it flows better with the pictures concept

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