just some observations from me:I don't like the white of the text box being flush with the top part of the page - I think it needs to have some black at the top + this from my daughter - she thought that the sandman's legs followed on from the his tie - I didn't see this, but afterwards I can't stop noticing :)But to be honest, I felt completely immersed in the story - and can't wait for the next page! in short - love the drawing, and keen to read the next page :)
I agree with you on the text box after looking at it again, it looks off. And like you, I also didn't notice the tie thing until you pointed it out, lol. I think I'll change it so that it's a different colour. Thank you for your comments. I'll post the third page up!
the guys curly red cheeks look weird on page three :)
yeah! What's it got to do with him, spit it out!!! I want to know too!
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