But only half an hour to go before midnight and still lots of people haven't posted - too bad for them!
General comment directed at people doing what looks like personal stories, which I think is an area rich with potential.
You want to reflect and describe the tiniest of details which you believe your audience could empathize with - at the moment the scripts seem like sharp shrift bursts of expression, without thinking about how you draw the reader into your story
Consider the unfolding of your story, allow/force your reader to use their imagination by playing with CLOSURE - Give us only pieces of the puzzle so we need to work things out - And Don't Duplicate the text with the visuals in the panels
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what does it mean when your trying to upload something and then it says error HTML?
depending on whether you are using a mac or a pc, and the browser, you usually get two ways of typing in info - "edit html" and "compose" - it's best to use compose, as it shouldn't come up with html errors
okay then thanks chiu, i was really worried when it poped up saying that. thanks again
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