you can see outside influences in your style, and yet it still feels very unique, which is great - the panel transitions and even more the individual compositions are getting more varied - I see lots of potential - and I'm eager to see more :)
do you think the three last panels on page one need some onomatopoeia to indicate the bashing at the door before it gives way?
im thinking about some kind of 'sound effect' getting bigger with close up. i will see what works while editing it.thanks Chiu ;]
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you can see outside influences in your style, and yet it still feels very unique, which is great - the panel transitions and even more the individual compositions are getting more varied - I see lots of potential - and I'm eager to see more :)
do you think the three last panels on page one need some onomatopoeia to indicate the bashing at the door before it gives way?
im thinking about some kind of 'sound effect' getting bigger with close up. i will see what works while editing it.
thanks Chiu ;]
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