The moment-to-moment Transition worked best for me with the smooth turning of the guy’s head and his slight change in emotion as if his eyesight was now hooked on to the fly. And the subtle reaction to when the guy sneezed in the action-to-action strip gave it a humorous ending Only concern I have with the images is the quality of the blue outlined thumbnails they are slightly burly and ruin the overall response to the essential response to the story and art.
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The moment-to-moment Transition worked best for me with the smooth turning of the guy’s head and his slight change in emotion as if his eyesight was now hooked on to the fly. And the subtle reaction to when the guy sneezed in the action-to-action strip gave it a humorous ending
Only concern I have with the images is the quality of the blue outlined thumbnails they are slightly burly and ruin the overall response to the essential response to the story and art.
Thanks. I totally agree about the blue pencil it doesn't come thru strong enough on the scanner. I may have to ink these panels up...
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