rough out script pages

Page rough outs very basic idea

Page1

boy makes a wish at devils creek for a friend, the devils hear his wish and they think it’s the perfect chance for some mischief and start making him a little gift they take the gift to him.

Page2

the boy turns and finds the gift and goes to it

Page3

the boy picks it up and hugs it tightly, the gift gives a evil grin cuts off,

Page4

showing the location of the story, boy sits with gift at dinner table mother cooks in kitchen, gift turns to boy and tells him to throw food at his mother

Page5

splat mother is hit with food turns around, and yells at boy boy tries to tell her about the gift, but thinks his lying because it’s a toy

Page6

boy walks down road, gift tells him to smash a car window, the boy picks up rock and then drops it

Page7

smash the cars windows broken, owner comes out and chases boy

Page8

boy gets home, mother finds out, boy in trouble

Page 9

gift tells boy to get rid of her boy squirms and protests and fights the idea

Page10

gift takes it into his own hand and attempts the assassination boy and mother shocked

Page11

boy fights gift

Page12

boy fights gift mom grabs frying pan hits gift

Page13

bear hits floor and goes to move when bam his hit again

Page14

boy grabs bag mom grabs the gift ties it up puts in bag

Page15

fast diving to devils creek out of car mom holds bag out and sets alight and drops it into the creek

Page16 bag vanish mom turns hugs her boy devils reappear and find the out come amusing

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I find it helpful to rough the pages out first this is a very rough idea page one has been scirpted basic breaking down a story i think it needs more excitement its based of ape entertainments ive been studying two comics from this publisher there stories are simple and easy to understand im just affaid this idea is to simple