Front Cover to the new Ink Soup- the back cover should hopefully be up tonight if I find myself happy with it, but in the mean time feel free to rip this apart first :D
give it some sky or clouds or smoke around the title, as well a adding issue #4 - but keep the area around the city below sparse to keep the comntrast, otherwise the title looks like an after thought!
I'll try and edit details for the sky and get the 4 in there as agreed it's sparse at the top. And I drew more around the edges, but I'll exaggerate more to make a prominent bleed.
hmm yeah maybe add some clouds- or maybe some of those old fashioned planes (finale of king kong stylee) they could help frame the titel as well if u wanted to? i wouldnt change it too much though it looks brilliant and keep that negative space. makes it a lot more impactful (might not be a word)
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hey murray
really like it! great job :D
i was jus wondering is it easy to add #4 or issue #4? think it d be better for the "record"
give it some sky or clouds or smoke around the title, as well a adding issue #4 - but keep the area around the city below sparse to keep the comntrast, otherwise the title looks like an after thought!
love the city!
you better make a bleed!!!
I'll try and edit details for the sky and get the 4 in there as agreed it's sparse at the top. And I drew more around the edges, but I'll exaggerate more to make a prominent bleed.
look at good comic book covers for clues!
hmm yeah maybe add some clouds- or maybe some of those old fashioned planes (finale of king kong stylee) they could help frame the titel as well if u wanted to? i wouldnt change it too much though it looks brilliant and keep that negative space. makes it a lot more impactful (might not be a word)
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