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Thank God I finally managed to pull this together!!! I really lost all will to live with this one so some of the frames probably need re - doing or altering. I'm also thinking of adding a title page but I've still got to look at some type faces before starting that.
If you could give me any feedback on this that would be great. Thanks
7 comments:
I loved it! The story was so clear! Is it for c'est bon kultur or macmillan?? Or both?
Ed! You need to send me tiffs, for ink Soup! not an indesign file! But this may not make you happy, but I'd rather publish the story you have here instead, as it fits really well for the freaky fable! let us know if it's okay!
Woooo chiu liked it!!!
I could put it forward for both C'est Bon Kultur and Mcmillan I guess. Yea use it for whatever you want!
lol this is absolutely quality!!! i love the detail especially the lighting and atmosphere in the image with the girl going through the cave towards the white light. yeah it took ages but it paid off!
woah, this is awesome Ed, some of the panels composition and atmosphere are amazing! If you were going to enter macmillan you would have to change the composition to 24 pages, to tell the story, so make your panels bigger, think it could def work, it's more down to whether you want to play around with compositions that much? There's not really alot of criticism i can give other than for next time round again try to edit some of your shots, as there is quite a few close ups, but they lose their impact slightly from alot of use, but to be honest that's very minor to what is an impressive piece of work, well done!
I can't believe how good Murray is!! I completely agree! If there's anything you could work on, would be to take out some of your close ups in order to give them more impact - excellent analysis murray! Is this the same Murray that comes to BIAD, or does this Murray have a twin brother????
umm...i'm not really sure how to respond to that... thank you?
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