lovely, i'm glad you've found some brighter subject matter to tackle. HEMERRHOIDS lol i like the 4th and 6th pages most, the way you've depicted the volcanoes and the movement of that flying shit beast thing in particular looks class, you create a sense of energy and movement which brings it to life. good stuff Mr Man.
A few of the pages I was unsure of individually but when you see the narrative as a whole the style and compositions really tie it together. I like the fluidity, but i think some pages are stronger than others. The only page that breaks the consistency is the water fasting page, I can't work out whether if it's the face or the type, but something sits uneasy for me- but to counter that the composition and transitions in the first 3 pages are a really striking and effective but unusual way of story telling.
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lovely, i'm glad you've found some brighter subject matter to tackle. HEMERRHOIDS lol i like the 4th and 6th pages most, the way you've depicted the volcanoes and the movement of that flying shit beast thing in particular looks class, you create a sense of energy and movement which brings it to life.
good stuff Mr Man.
Thank you Milan! It's good to have you comment on my stuff - you are definitely seeing the brighter side of me :)
A few of the pages I was unsure of individually but when you see the narrative as a whole the style and compositions really tie it together. I like the fluidity, but i think some pages are stronger than others. The only page that breaks the consistency is the water fasting page, I can't work out whether if it's the face or the type, but something sits uneasy for me- but to counter that the composition and transitions in the first 3 pages are a really striking and effective but unusual way of story telling.
and i def do not see the brighter side of you :)
Hi Murray! That's good, because I feel the same about the water fasting page - I'm thinking of re-doing it!
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