The Box- Pages 1-4

My four pages, let me know what you think, personally the more solid black is a more practical way of working for this strip, i appreciate what was said last week of my marks, but trying to get consistent pages with the marks and the odd layouts is proving too problematic, its something i'll address on my next attempt, but for this strip i prefer it like this, but please let me know what you think and about things i'll possibly have to change! Cheers