tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post8469868704457628168..comments2023-06-21T02:32:32.092-07:00Comments on Ink soup!: script and thumbnail roughsDebbie Lamberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00962175781535916755noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-72417882444536820112010-10-06T12:50:52.349-07:002010-10-06T12:50:52.349-07:00okay! Well I think the activating agent is the app...okay! Well I think the activating agent is the appearance of the bird - before then it's just introducing the character on the computer<br /><br />The rise in conflict, as in the switching back and forth from bird to guy on computer, suggests that a catastrophe is looming - but it's a pretty lame "rise" I'm not particularly moved or enlightened by the story or the moral of the story:<br /><br />Learn to always save at frequent times or you will pay for it one day.<br /><br />Well that was thought provoking, not!<br /><br />On the great side - excellent process in both your rough panel layouts and your script writing! Excellent examples of good practiceChiuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375137598312709642noreply@blogger.com