tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post4561652436755926122..comments2023-06-21T02:32:32.092-07:00Comments on Ink soup!: GodmanDebbie Lamberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00962175781535916755noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-26859860660756617332009-07-01T10:20:20.482-07:002009-07-01T10:20:20.482-07:00Thanks for all precise comments my comics have nev...Thanks for all precise comments my comics have never been critiqued as well as this before! I'll make some changes and post a new one up!Luke Kennedyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16226902024698735266noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-20423198913796986282009-06-24T07:53:46.194-07:002009-06-24T07:53:46.194-07:00*jus noticed now..the right hand of the god that h...*jus noticed now..the right hand of the god that holds the grapes at the top panel lookes a bit awkard..is there a way to fix it a bit? (well unless that s what you wanted it to be like so yea..)[N.P.]https://www.blogger.com/profile/11635229180856817577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-4776392435615940592009-06-24T07:48:12.345-07:002009-06-24T07:48:12.345-07:00hey
i quite liked how the style reminds a bit more...hey<br />i quite liked how the style reminds a bit more european comics such as Asterix&Ovelix art..<br />personally i liked the zooming on the god's face and the expressions that follow..they add more comic and comical (as in funny) flavor to it..<br />i would say that maybe the cloud at the top right panel needs a bit of shading jus so it balances with the really dark cloud beneath it..?[N.P.]https://www.blogger.com/profile/11635229180856817577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-80832514948600051452009-06-22T11:07:03.284-07:002009-06-22T11:07:03.284-07:00i think the straight on view is kind of okay becau...i think the straight on view is kind of okay because it gives the whole strip some symmetry and balance.<br />mayyyyybe black out the far right panel in the middle row instead of that black dark patch behind god? <br />wicked expressions and nice angles.Milanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13032110602480436601noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-21732917398687791182009-06-22T08:05:04.097-07:002009-06-22T08:05:04.097-07:00I'm not so comfortable with the straight on vi...I'm not so comfortable with the straight on view of God's faceChiuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375137598312709642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-44412372603492393652009-06-22T05:00:46.733-07:002009-06-22T05:00:46.733-07:00yes i agree with murrah. i was pretty unsure who w...yes i agree with murrah. i was pretty unsure who was speaking and where it was coming from.cherryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07170221300545731499noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-33024553401074669492009-06-22T03:44:06.005-07:002009-06-22T03:44:06.005-07:00Hey luke, haha got to admit bit awkward giving con...Hey luke, haha got to admit bit awkward giving construct crit to someone you haven't met, but are going to? I really enjoy the tone of the godman strips, theyre pretty hilarious. The left hand panel in the middle row is a great addition, but on the middle panel I'm not sure about the black shadow around the speech bubble? Hope this helpsMurrayMahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17266072772344467251noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2817405751303999583.post-31698441206983222412009-06-21T10:19:19.563-07:002009-06-21T10:19:19.563-07:00comments on luke's work from other contributor...comments on luke's work from other contributors would be helpful please!Chiuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13375137598312709642noreply@blogger.com